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If having been determined in Conference with the Prince of Kung that steps shall at once be taken by the Chinese force to ensure active cooperation with the Naval Force of H. M. on the coast of China for the suppression of piracy, I have to instruct you to give the Chinese battalion ... any assistance they may require for this object. You will further ...
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If having been determined in Conference with the Prince of Kung that steps shall at once be taken by the Chinese force to Ensure active cooperation with the Naval Force of H. M. on the coast of China for the suppression of piracy, I have to instruct you to give the Chinese battalion any assistance they may require for this object. You will further brand... at Kanglei; ...your Torchow, ...Canton.
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If having been determined in Conference with the Prince of Kung that steps shall at once be taken by the Chinese force to ensure active cooperation with the Naval Force of H. M. on the coast of China for the suppression of piracy, I have to instruct you to give the Chinese battalion any assistance they may require for this object. You will further brand... at Kanglei; kügter your Torchow, bency datter, Canton.
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If having been determined in Conference with the Prince of Kung that steps shall at once be taken by the Chinese force to ensure active cooperation with the Naval Force of H. M. on the coast of China for the suppression of piracy, I have to instruct you to give the Chinese battalion any assistance they may require for this object. You will further brand... at Kanglei; instruct your officer at Torchow, Canton.
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If having been determined in Conference with the Prince of Kung that steps shall at once be taken by the Chinese force to ensure active cooperation with the Naval Force of H. M. on the coast of China for the suppression of piracy, I have to instruct you to give the Chinese battalion any assistance they may require for this object. You will further brand... at Kanglei; instruct your officer at Torchow, Canton.
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If having been determined in Conference with the Prince of Kung that steps shall at once be taken by the Chinese force to ensure active cooperation with the Naval Force of H. M. on the coast of China for the suppression of piracy, I have to instruct you to give the Chinese battalion any assistance they may require for this object. You will further brand... at Kanglei; kügter your Torchow, bency datter, Canton.
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If having been determined in Conference with the Prince of Kung that steps shall at once be taken by the Chinese force to ensure active cooperation with the Naval Force of H. M. on the coast of China for the suppression of piracy, I have to instruct you to give the Chinese battalion any assistance they may require for this object. You will further brand... at Kanglei; instruct your officer at Torchow, Canton.
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